How NOT to Impress a Potential Prospect

January 7, 2015 by Marte Cliff

For starters, sending promotional mail through LinkedIn to a mass audience pretty much labels a person as a spammer, but in this case, it gets worse.

The person who mailed me today sent a message that began: “This could be the perfect business opportunity that fits what ever else your doing!”

If the person doesn’t know basic grammar and / or doesn’t take time to proofread and see the error in his very first sentence, WHY would I trust him to tell me anything else?

About Marte Cliff

Marte Cliff is a professional real estate copywriter with a past - as a real estate agent and then owner/broker. She understands the real estate business, the challenges agents face, and the wants, needs, and fears that real estate clients face. She also understands the psychology of marketing.

When not writing, Marte enjoys reading, gardening, visiting with friends and family, and spending time with her canine companions. She enjoys life in a quiet mountain valley with wildlife as her nearest neighbors.